Have you been in love or do you love someone?
what can be better than share your happines with the person you love, what can be better than feel how your heart beats when your love is next to you, what can be better than live your life knowing that someone is always there and fully in love with you.......
When you finally accept you fall in love what else can be next than enjoy all those precious moments to come, all the happines that will be part of your life and how much love will you be sharing.........
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Hey Mayra,
I really agree with what you've said there. It's definitely an awesome feeling to be in love.
Well, i am not an editor like Professor. Egle but i'll still try my best to point out some of your mistakes.
-> Capitalisation is required in the second sentence ...
-> What could've been better than sharing your happiness with the person you love? What could've been better than living you life knowing that some loved one is always there for you?
-> Parallel Construction is missing there. (I guess)
-> You also have a couple of spelling mistakes.
-Darshan
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